My cratered moon

Discussion in 'Your Writer's Den' started by solari, Jan 26, 2015.

  1. solari

    solari MM.org Janitor Staff Member

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    Oh, my moon
    My cratered moon

    Whenever I looked up
    clearly I could see you

    But now you are fading
    into the blackness

    Stars showing a memory
    of where you were once

    Oh, my moon
    My cratered moon

    Don't let me
    forget you.

    ~ Ray
     
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  2. Nice!
     
  3. Halos

    Halos Member

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    That was very nice Solari

    Trisha
     
  4. BumbleBea

    BumbleBea Fallen Angel

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    All of your poetry is touching. I wish I could contribute.

    Keep posting! I go over them many times, they make me think and picture the scene. Very good.

    Are you published? If not, you should think about it!
     
  5. Bulldogs

    Bulldogs Well-Known Member

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    Good stuff!
     
  6. RoKo

    RoKo Ron Kostiuk

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    Any poem that invokes emotion is worthy of praise. I enjoyed the poem. thank you.
    BE HAPPY
    RoKo
     
  7. DL Bach

    DL Bach Member

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    Wow! That is the only thing to come to mind right now, just WOW!
     

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