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Saltless River Of Sorrow

Discussion in 'Your Writer's Den' started by DL Bach, May 19, 2014.

  1. DL Bach

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    I wrote this last year as part of my book which was published on Amazon.

    Saltless River Of Sorrow

    Tossed into the uncharted depths
    where unbridled tears abide
    in a river which rolls
    as deep as it is wide.

    Never waning,
    no ebb and flow,
    but a whirlpool of rapids
    which toss to and fro.

    Nightmares and fear fill
    this raging, venomous sea.
    It is a journey not chosen;
    thrust into this odyssey.

    Perhaps the shape of a lifeboat
    my eyes will peer on the morrow,
    but for now, lost, I am
    in my saltless river of sorrow.

    April 8, 2013

    ┬ęDL Bach
     
  2. BumbleBea

    BumbleBea Fallen Angel

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    This is very good, you are very talented.
     
  3. DL Bach

    DL Bach Member

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    Thank you, BumbleBea.
     
  4. Hope that you're feeling better. Great poem!
     
  5. Bella

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    Beautiful and congrats on being published.
     
  6. Bulldogs

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    Beautiful
     
  7. BumbleBea

    BumbleBea Fallen Angel

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    Anyone who can write so articulately, with so much feeling, has so much to offer. I wish you'd spend more time here. I wish I could get to know you. I wish you would rethink your possibilities.
    I think I'd like you.
    I hope you'll reply.
    There are so many people wanting to reach out to you. All you have to do is reach back.
     
  8. DL Bach

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    BumbleBea, I am returned now. Doing much better emotionally and feeling stable.
     
  9. BumbleBea

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    That's great! So good to hear from you.
     

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