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The Mist

Discussion in 'Your Writer's Den' started by BumbleBea, Jan 26, 2016.

  1. BumbleBea

    BumbleBea Fallen Angel

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    I'm on my deck and it's dark.
    I can't see the moon through the clouds but I know it's there. I can feel it as if it's a part of me.
    The mist surrounds me, it's soft.
    I feel myself being lifted, softly.
    I'm floating not flying .
    I'm passing through and above the trees.
    I smell everything.
    It's quiet and as it should be.
    I'm floating over the ocean and I see the dark, whipping waves. The power.
    I'm a part of it.
    It's a part of me.
    I'm being gently placed on land.
    Now I can see the waves hitting the shoreline. The power.
    It's a part of me and I'm a part of it.
    I feel my feet slide into the soft sand.
    They're being caressed.
    I sit and I'm hugging my knees in wonder.
    I take one hand and fill it with sand and watch it slowly float down to the beach.
    I do the same with the other hand.
    It's as if every granule represents a feeling, a thought, a time, a wish, a dream.
    I reach with both hands now and hold them up as an offering to whatever Gods or Spirits there are.
    It gently slips away.
    It's a part of me and I'm a part of it.
    I bow my head and I feel an Angels Wings softly wrap around me.
    Everything is so soft.
    Her hands on my face with such a gentle caress as barely there.
    "You are you...that's all you ever need to be."
    Is it a whisper or something I hear in my head?
    I feel glorious, powerful, at Peace.
    Back where I was never having left at all I look around with wonder.
    This is not Just a house, this is a part of me. Of what I made it. Of what I envisioned. Of what I live for.
    I smell the trees and the air.
    I feel the mist.
    I see.
    I see what I feel.
    It's a part of me and I'm a part of it.
    It's me
     
  2. Very beautiful Bea



    Write more
     
  3. BumbleBea

    BumbleBea Fallen Angel

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    I don't usually write poetry.
    This one just came and seemed to flow without me knowing what would come next.
    I know it means something it I can't figure it out.'im breaking it down and that isn't working.
     
  4. You have it going on :)
     
  5. Bump


    Love reading this
     

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